Norah Aven - clever and good value, but disappointing
A year ago, I got the Flower Letters story, The Norah Aven Chronicles. I just finished reading the last letter, so I thought that I'd post a review. The overall concept of the Flower letters is clever, with stories being told in letters (different handwriting fonts for different characters), Journal Entries, "newspaper articles", encoded postcards, and screenshots of cell phones, etc. (I am sure that more historic stories substitute something else for the screenshot pieces.) There is also usually a sticker in the envelope. Overall value is very nice - each envelope is filled to around 1oz with letters, stickers, cards, etc. The sheer amount of stuff you get in each envelope is basically worth at least $2-3/letter, and they only charged me $4.00 ($99 per year, 24 letters), so they don't appear to be trying to make a ridiculous profit. The story itself is where I was disappointed. Norah Aven could have been a lot of things: sci-fi, fantasy, social commentary -- and yet it largely turned out to be the core of their market, a romance story with some adventure and sci-fi aspects. I do wish that they had been more clear about the nature of the story in the ads, I would probably have been less disappointed if I had been expecting a sci-fi romance instead of a sci-fi adventure. Setting aside the disappointment of getting a romance after I had specifically tried to avoid a romance, the story itself is mixed in its execution. The first roughly half a dozen letters were great - plenty of action, with a mix of exposition, interesting worldbuilding, etc. Unfortunately, then the story became really unevenly paced, and reading each letter became more and more frustrating as it seemed to be being written without sufficient story arc planning -- the pace of he story within the letters in the middle eventually slowed to a crawl, with some of the letters focusing solely on how the two main characters (romance novel) were feeling in a specific moment, with barely anything to move the plot along. I actually had to make myself read the last 5-6, because I was beginning to be concerned that they were not going to finish the story at all, and that I was going to have paid $99 for half a story and a bunch of character development. I am pleased to say that turned out not to be true - the story did actually resolve (with the promise of a sequel that is probably available to order now), in a generally satisfying way, but only during the last 3-5 letters. So my one suggestion to them is this: re-work the story to keep the character development more evenly dispersed across and integrated with the actual plotline, so that your middle can maintain the momentum of the story arc. It might miake the first half a dozen letter move more slowly, but it would make the series into something that was more worth saving in the tins you like to sell with these sets. Overall, I am glad that I purchased the letters. I did probably get $100 worth of entertainment out of them. But I encourage future purchasers to expect beauty, adventure, and romance, and to moderate their expectations of story quality to avoid being disappointed.
May 30, 2025
Unprompted review